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  • WRFF Archive Re: Antigone's Critique Shop

    Please do this: Mission Zero part 3 action/adventure fiction I don't think it's too long. Also there is two previous parts that you may need to read to understand this ...

    Aug 31, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: oh, FINE... if you insist.

    Please review this, I know I'm not explaining much but tell me what you think from this: there is a first and second part, you should probably read those first! ...

    Aug 31, 2009
  • Official Polls Re: What Perspective Do You Like To Write In?

    I like first person, it has more character depth. But I usually write in third person, it makes it easier to jump from character to character. So in other words, ...

    Aug 31, 2009
  • Official Polls Re: YWS Needs A Mascot!

    Gahh! I can't decide! I'm stuck between dragon and monkey. Hey, I know! A monkey riding a dragon! . . . OK, maybe that's not such a great idea. A ...

    Aug 31, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Alex Rider Series by Anthony Horowitz

    Hey I really like those books too! I'm finished the fifth one and am waiting for the sixth one from the library. I like the series because they're not boring. ...

    Aug 30, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "Find a way to get a normal life."~Kevin "Become a fashion designer, duh!"~Kristy "Goal? What goal?"~Matilda ________________________________ If you painted a picture, what would it be?

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Mission Zero part 3

    Kevin was sitting in his room inside the Dark Wing when he heard the news. He froze, leaning over to bandage his leg. “ . . . Matilda Darley has ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: What random thing did you do today?

    Cut my thumb on a cheese grater. I just got started and I miss-grated. LOL! :lol:

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Muggy Got a What?!?! (sequel to Muggy: Detective Pug)

    And yet another excellent piece of work from YodelingVet1! (by the way, love the username! :wink: ) You have a neat writing style. If someone else wrote this story it ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Research Re: Do your characters know that they're not real real?

    I sometimes have conversations with my character on paper. Well more like an interview. I ask a question and try to figure out what my character would do. It's pretty ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey!

    Hello Laura! Welcome to YWS! :elephant: Can't wait to see some of your stories! If you have any questions just ask. :D

    Aug 29, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: free reviews all around

    Here's my stories. Please give me your opinions. Also could you do the second one? It's the second one I need reviews on. Thanks :wink:

    Aug 28, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Muggy: Detective Pug

    This is so cute! :lol: You're very creative, and the story was great. Here's a few suggestions that might help: Dialogue: There sure it lots of it (and that's good!) ...

    Aug 28, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: An Unlikely Hero - Issue 6

    One word: WOW! This is really good! Like really really good. The only question I have is what took you so long? It doesn't matter. I really like the world ...

    Aug 28, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello!

    Welcome xisa! I'm glad you found this site. Hope you post some of your work soon, I'm sure it will be good! :D Personally, I think mysteries are the hardest ...

    Aug 28, 2009


If I have any beliefs about immortality, it is that certain dogs I have known will go to heaven - and very, very few persons.
— James Thurber