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Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
Please do this: Mission Zero part 3 action/adventure fiction I don't think it's too long. Also there is two previous parts that you may need to read to understand this ...
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Re: oh, FINE... if you insist.
Please review this, I know I'm not explaining much but tell me what you think from this: there is a first and second part, you should probably read those first! ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: What Perspective Do You Like To Write In?
I like first person, it has more character depth. But I usually write in third person, it makes it easier to jump from character to character. So in other words, ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: YWS Needs A Mascot!
Gahh! I can't decide! I'm stuck between dragon and monkey. Hey, I know! A monkey riding a dragon! . . . OK, maybe that's not such a great idea. A ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Alex Rider Series by Anthony Horowitz
Hey I really like those books too! I'm finished the fifth one and am waiting for the sixth one from the library. I like the series because they're not boring. ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Find a way to get a normal life."~Kevin "Become a fashion designer, duh!"~Kristy "Goal? What goal?"~Matilda ________________________________ If you painted a picture, what would it be?
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Mission Zero part 3
Kevin was sitting in his room inside the Dark Wing when he heard the news. He froze, leaning over to bandage his leg. “ . . . Matilda Darley has ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: What random thing did you do today?
Cut my thumb on a cheese grater. I just got started and I miss-grated. LOL! :lol:
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Muggy Got a What?!?! (sequel to Muggy: Detective Pug)
And yet another excellent piece of work from YodelingVet1! (by the way, love the username! :wink: ) You have a neat writing style. If someone else wrote this story it ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Do your characters know that they're not real real?
I sometimes have conversations with my character on paper. Well more like an interview. I ask a question and try to figure out what my character would do. It's pretty ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Hey!
Hello Laura! Welcome to YWS! :elephant: Can't wait to see some of your stories! If you have any questions just ask. :D
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: free reviews all around
Here's my stories. Please give me your opinions. Also could you do the second one? It's the second one I need reviews on. Thanks :wink:
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Muggy: Detective Pug
This is so cute! :lol: You're very creative, and the story was great. Here's a few suggestions that might help: Dialogue: There sure it lots of it (and that's good!) ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: An Unlikely Hero - Issue 6
One word: WOW! This is really good! Like really really good. The only question I have is what took you so long? It doesn't matter. I really like the world ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Hello!
Welcome xisa! I'm glad you found this site. Hope you post some of your work soon, I'm sure it will be good! :D Personally, I think mysteries are the hardest ...
Aug 28, 2009
